L P - My advice would be to try and write it like an academic article in that i mean any reasonings or conclusion deduced should be referenced to evidence supporting your claim.
LP, the article is not aimed at academics, but rather JW's. If JW's were concerned with academic references, they would not be JW's, since little of what is in the Watchtower is ever properly referenced. If you look at the email that I received, you will see the level of reasoning skills of the average JW reader, who dismisses the entire article because it contradicts a JW article, and one that is not even accurate at that. That is why I have tried to make most pf the points simple and logical, where they can be understood without a need of scientific references. That being said, I have referenced most contentious points made in the article, but have noticed at your suggestion that there are a few more that I should add.
jwfacts: my suggestion only adds to the validity of the article. Not all jws are uneducated. And further my suggestion was not to aim the article at academics or use academic language. One can write a simply logical article in academic style i.e. referenced throughout the article. Doing this adds strength to your article in the scientific community as they can refer to it and it could possibly be recognised. But thats just a suggestion to open up possibilities.
Lp